This was amazing! I really love the reveal of the mirror's "power," I had a fun time reading it back and seeing how something changed every time a different time was brought up. Honestly, this was a really creative way to go with the glass prompt and I really don't have any constructive feedback to give! Absolutely another banger
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Thank you so much!! And thanks again for hosting this!
Sweet. I expected some horror ending, but I am totally satisfied with what you provided instead of what was promised. Maybe it would have been even better if we had one or two more examples of time being mentioned in front of the mirror before the big reveal, but it was tricky to implement. Well done anyway, great story
Thank you!! I’m really glad you thought the ending was satisfying! Yeah, I also feel like more examples would’ve been good, I’m thinking of making a revised and more polished version soon, I’ll definitely keep that in mind!! Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback!! ❤️
EmilyRose420
You should make this into a comic
wayyward
Ohh, that's a really cool idea, I might actually do that!! :D